I Sense Eternity

Nae's Nest —  June 28, 2012 — 4 Comments

I Sense Eternity

I was there!  I was at the gate!

I heard the heartbeat, I knew my fate!

I heard eternity….I had it in my grasp……….


I let it go…………………

I had it by the ass

I turned around and it was gone

It slipped away

You don’t know how that feels, To be so close

Self-inflicted doomsday

I screwed it all up

Eternity was mine 

I lost it……the key to All

My immortality!

All of life’s answers, I feel so small

I could have lived forever………..but now, now death will call

I can smell it, a pungent odor

Making the air heavy, my lungs hangover

Drunk on death

As it comes for me

As it claims my soul

I Sense


Renee Robinson







Nae's Nest


I find myself "Dancing With Cancer", problem is...I can't dance. I stumble, bumble, and get pulled along. To keep my sanity, (humor me), I write short stories, a journal, musings and poetry....just about anything goes.

4 responses to I Sense Eternity


    Nae, this is so compelling, so gripping.

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